Write a short paragraph where you introduce yourself. Mention the following:
- your name (not your surnames)
- your age
- something about your family
- something about your school
- your hobbies
- your favourite music
- your favourite film(s)
- your ambitions for the future. For example, "I would like to be an astronaut!" :)
Hi! My name is Lucia. I'm 14 years old.
ResponderEliminarI have a little brother. His name is Sergi and he is 9 years old. Also, I have a mother and father. Their names are Montse and Miguel. I have a pet in my house. It is a cat,Its name is Garfield is a Persa.
My school name is Salesians School. I'm in 3th of ESO.
My hobbies are Dance,Run and Sing. Every Friday i go to dance.
My favorite film is Combustion . And my favorite actor are Alex González and Adriana Ugarte.
I would like to be a Psychologist.
Dear Lucía,
ResponderEliminarYou have written a very nice piece of writing. Just consider revising your spelling, ok? For example, in British English we say "favourite" not favorite, which is American English. And you are in 3rd (with RD) of ESO. Apart from that, the rest of the text is clear and understandable. So congratulations! :)
Oh, by the way, it's really nice that you want to be a psychologist. I think it is a very nice profession and I am sure you will be a really good one if you study hard.
Hi! My name 's is Paula. I'm 12 years old.
ResponderEliminarI have a little brother. His name is Hugo and he's 5 years old.
My mother name's is Raquel and my father name's is Jorge.
My mother has brown eyes and my father also.
I have a dog and his name is Bruno and he has 4 years old.
My school name is Joan Brossa. I'm in 1st of Eso.
My hobbies are Dance and Sing.
I love pop music and I my favorite singer is Justin Bieber. My favourite film is Never say Never.
I would like to be journalist!
Dear Paula,
EliminarYou have written a very nice piece of writing. There are some minor mistakes but they are not very important and I am sure that if you pay attention, you will never make them again.
For example, remember the question "how old ARE you?". If this is the question, the answer must be "I AM 12 years old". So when you speak about your dog (Bruno, right?), you should say that "he IS 4 years old", ok?
I already knew that you were a Justin Bieber fan but what I didn't know was that you wanted to be a journalist. What a nice profession! I am sure you will be a wonderful journalist in the future! :)
And as for the film "Never say Never"... I have never heard of it. Is it good? Who are the actors? You have to tell me all about it, ok?
Hi! My name is Ariadna. I'm eleven years old.
ResponderEliminarI have a Young sister. Her name is Marta, she is seven years old and sometimes she is very boring. My mother name's is Palmira and she work's in the "Picasso Museum" .My father name's is Miquel Angel but he prefer Mikel. He work's in the "Torre Agbar".
My name's school is Torrent de Can Carabassa. It is a public school and i love my school.
My hobbies are swimming, dancing and reading.
I like pop music and my favourite Singer is Rihanna but my favourite song is "Starships" from Nicki Mingi. i don't have favourita film but if i have to chose one film is "el mago de Oz" but tha new versión that it have première this year.
I would like to be a teacher or a sporty journalist in the futer
Dear Ariadna,
EliminarYou have written a very nice introduction of yourself. In terms of English usage, I have to tell you that you have made the same mistake many times: example... "my mother name's Palmira" should be "my mother's name's Palmira" (you forgot the -'s which means "de" in Spanish or Catalan). Also, you have made a mistake when using the present simple in the third person singular. Example: when you spoke about your father, you said that "he work's in the T.A." It's not necessary to put an apostrophe before the s, because the s is included in the verb. Thus, you should have written: "He works in the T.A.", ok?
In general, you should revise the spelling in some words because "I" always has to be written in CAPITAL letters and "favorita" is a Spanish word... ;)
But, apart form that, the text is clear and understandable. Oh, by the way, I also like Rihanna. I don't know the song you talk about "Starships" from Nicki Mingi. Can I find it in YouTube to listen to it?
And as for your favourite film, I also like "The Wizard of Oz". It's a beautiful film!
Finally, you say you would like to be a teacher or a journalist. I think both jobs are really nice for you! :)
Yes, my dad Works in T.A.
EliminarYes, you can fine the song of "Starsships" from Nicki Mingi in YouTube.
Dear Ariadna,
EliminarI have listened to the song in YouTube. It's a beautiful song and very good for dancing! ;)
Thanks for sharing it with me!
Hello! My name is Albert. I'm thirteen years old.
ResponderEliminarI don't have brothers, but I have parents. My mother name is Rita and she works to portfolio and my dad works to admin, her name is Santiago.
The name of my school is Josep Pla, is an institute. I'm in 2nd of ESO.
My hobbies are playing football, reading and watching television.
I really like pop music because it is easy to remember.
My favourite film is Avatar because there is plenty of action as I like, and because the special effects are awesome.
At the moment, I would to be sports journalists but I think when I grow I change this opinion.
Hello Albert,
EliminarSo you are an only-child, right? This means that you don't have any brothers or sisters. However, I am sure you have lots of good friends and some cousins...
You have written a beautiful introduction about yourself. There are some mistakes but I am sure you will avoid them if you pay attention in the future. Thus, when you refer to a man - in this case your father, Santiago - you should write "his name is" (not her name is, ok?).
You mentioned that your favourite film was Avatar. You are lucky this week as I think you can watch this film on TV. It's true that this film is full of action and, I totally agree with you when you say that its special effects are "awesome" (a very nice word, Albert).
As for the job you would like to to in the future, well, being a journalist is a nice job but, as you say, it's possible for you to change your mind (or opinión) when you get older. Who knows?
Hello Conchi
EliminarYes, I am only child.
Thanks for telling me the mistakes I did, now I have understood.
You're right, what a good job is to be a journalist, but there is much unemployment.
Thank you for having responded.
Goodbye Conchi
Hello!! My name is Carmen González. I am 11 years old.
ResponderEliminarI have one sisther called Sara. My mum Nuria doesn't work because she is a disabled person, and my father Pedro is a software engineer.
My school name is: Mare de Deu del Roser Amílcar. I am doing sixteen course and I have a lot of friends.
My hobbies are dancing modern music and play difficult sports!
I love POP music and my favorite singer is Justin Bieber. His music is really beautyful!!
My favorite films are scary movies, for exemple (se lo que hicisteis el ultimo verano) it's TERRORIFIC !! and I love action films too.
My ambition for the future is to be a famous Singer like Justin Bieber!! but I would like to be a primart teacher too.
Hello Carmen!
EliminarHow nice all the things you tell us in this "Let's introduce ourselves!" activity. Something I don't understand is that you can study "sixteen course". Does it exist a 16th course in your school? Or maybe did you want to say that you are in the sixth (6th) level of primary education?
As for your hobbies, what type of "difficult sports" do you like playing? I am curious...
You mentioned that your favourite singer (with U after the O in British English) is Justin B. I think there are more classmates who like him and his music, too. Do you think his music is BEAUTIFUL? That's great!
As for films... films are scary not "terrorific", alright?
And, finally, your ambition for the future... umm, so you want to be a pop star? By the way, do you sing well? And you also would like to be a primary teacher... maybe you could combine your two passions into one: why not being a music teacher with primary children? I am sure you would be a fantastic teacher! :)
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ResponderEliminarHi! My name is Cindy .I’m 16 years old.
ResponderEliminarI have two brothers. Theirs names is Jose of 14 and Jordan of 8 years old.
My mother name’s is Yesenia and my father name’s is Jose .
I have a dog , turtle and goldfish .His name dog is Dina and she has 4 months and name turtle Bubu and she has 4 months , and goldfish don't have name.
My school name is Joan Brossa .I’m in 4th of ESO.
My hobbies are Dancing and swimming. Sometimes on Saturdays I go to dance.
I love salsa and bachata . My favorite film is Fast & furious .
I would like to be criminologist.
Hello Cindy!
EliminarYou have written a very nice introduction. There are some minor mistakes, though. For example, you should have said: "Their names are..." when you speak about your brothers. Also, you should have said: "My mother's name is..." using the 's (Genitive Saxon) and the same applies for your father, ok?
Finally, you speak about your pets (you have many pets!) and your hobbies. So you go dancing sometimes on Saturdays, right? I am sure you must be a really good dancer.
As for the job you would like to do in the future: criminologist! Phew! That's a very peculiar job. Do you like TV series such as C.S.I and The Mentalist?
Hi! my name is Sol. I'm fifteen years old.
ResponderEliminarI don't have any brothers. I have a mother and father. Their names are Stella and Sebastian.
My school name is Joan Brossa. I'm in 4th of ESO.
My hobbies are listen to music and dancing.
My fovourite music are pop, R&B and house.
My fovourite film is The Vow.
I would like to be a business or economy.
Hello Sol. You have also written a very nice introduction. The sentences are very clear, too.
EliminarYour hobbies are nice. Listening to music and dancing are very typical hobbies but, in my opinión, two of the best hobbies a person can have... ;)
The type of music that you like is also very interesting: pop, house and R&B are nice music styles.
And as for the profession you would like to have in the future: you say that you would like to be a business woman or an economist. Phew! Are you sure? These professions seem to be having problems nowadays... ;) However, I am sure you will be a fantastic business woman or economist if you really want to do that. Any kind of business in mind?
Hello,
ResponderEliminarMy name is Anna. I'm fifteen years old. I don't have any brothers and sisters. My mother's name is Olga and she works in a secretarial advice. My father's name is Josep and he works of photographer. The name's of my school is Sagrada Familia Horta. It is a concerted school, I like my school and I learn a lot. My hobbies are basketball and singing. I play basketball in a club and I sing in the school choir. I like pop music and my favourite Singers are Rihanna, Mackelmore, Kesha and Adele but my favourite album is "Avicci". I don't have favourite film but if i have to chose three films are "Los juegos del hambre, La gran boda and Scary movie 5". I would like to be a sports therapist or a psychologist in the future.
Hello Anna,
EliminarYour introduction is very nice and clear. There are some minor mistakes but they are nothing serious. For example, you explain that your father works AS a photographer (not "of photographer", ok?).
As for your hobbies, I think dancing and singing are very nice hobbies. Do you sing well? I think so because you say that you sing in a choir!!! As for your favourite singers, I also like Rihanna and Adele but I don't know many songs by Mackelmore or Kesha. Can you tell me some of their most famous songs?
Finally, your plans for the future. So you say you would like to be a sports therapist or a psychologist, right? I firmly believe both professions are very nice. Do you have any preference? :)
Hi, my name is Salma. I ´m eleven years old. I ´dont have broders or sisters. My mothers name´s Yolanda, she reserbs hotels. My father name ´s Jordi and he works of monting block of pladur .The name of my school is Torrent de can carabassa, i like my school because i lern a lot of things. My hobbies are dancing and swiming. I love pop music i don´t have favourite singer, my favourite film is Mama mia and my favourite actress is Kristen Stewart . I would like to be Stewardess of flight at the future
ResponderEliminarDear Salma,
EliminarYou have written a very nice introduction. Pay attention to some mistakes you have made, ok? For example: "broders" is "broTHers" in English, ok? Also pay attention to the genitive saxon (example: my mother's name's Yolanda" and "my father's name's Jordi). In both cases you need to put the 's after mother and father, right?
It is also very important to remember that the personal pronoun "I" always has to be written in CAPITAL LETTER, ok?
As for your hobbies, I think dancing and swimMing (with double M) are very nice hobbies.
You also say that you don't have ANY favourite singer but you do have a favourite film: Mamma Mia. I also like this film a lot. I think it's very funny and the songs are beautiful!
Finally, your plans for the future: you say that you would like to be a stewardess. Phew! That's very nice but it also means that you will need to learn many foreign languages: English, French, German, Italian...etc. Are you learning more languages apart from English? :)
Hello conchi! my name is Sofia , I'm 12 years old. I have three sisters, and we spend our time having fun. I have a dog, call Lucas. My favourite hobbie is play theater, I really like act! My favourite singer is Bruno Mars and my favourite song is "When I was your man", this song is very sad but i really like it. My favourite film is "intocable".
ResponderEliminarI would like to be a hollywood actress, but I think that if you aren't famouse, you don't have money, for that reason I would like district, too.
bye.
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ResponderEliminarHi! my name is Roger.
ResponderEliminarI'm twelve years old.
I have one brother his name is Miquel his twenty years old, my mothers name is Maricarmen and my fathers name is Jorge.
I have one dog and his name is Blues.
My school's name is Safa horta.
My favourite hobbie is play handball.
My favourite song is Better Together.
My favourite film is el corredor del laberinto.
I would like to be a cooker.
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